Hi there, I have a sample of my new MS to share with you. It's chapter one, so no explanations are necessary. As always, leave a comment if you are moved to do so, thanks. 1 U NCLE Jack pressed a two-shilling piece into Lili’s hot little hand. “You take your sisters to the shop and get a bottle of lemonade to share.” “Thank you, Uncle Jack,” said Lili who was always polite to uncles and aunties. Taking out her hanky she wrapped the precious coin and put it in her pocket. Puffed up at her own importance Lili took hold of our hands and we started off down the road, “Uncle Jack must be very rich, Lili. That’s a lot of money and he’s so kind too, not like Mum’s uncle Fred, who always tickles me, and I don’t like it. He never buys us anything.” “I know Pet, don’t worry about that now, let’s get to the shop before it closes.” We continued down the quiet street; unusually, it was even too hot for the boys to be out playing cricket, with the light car traffic, they got a few over...
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