Hello there,
I have a short story to show you, something completely different from my usual offerings. It's called
The Gardenia Private Hotel
It held its secrets within the
solid south-west-facing walls of stone, a short, steep walk from the Atlantic
Ocean. The owner-occupiers held themselves along with the secrets of their
guests. Privacy was what drew regular visitors year after year in the
off-season?
Built in the
nineteenth century from the traditional Cornwall stone, with sheltered windows gazing
in all directions, the mansion sits smugly beyond the high walls facing the
street. Nestled behind which, the garden, with the titular gardenias and fish
pond creating a perfect space for afternoon tea.
Each room is
secluded from the others; up a flight of stairs, through the glass door and up
three more steps to a short hall. Once inside the door, it’s as if we were the
only guests. We didn’t meet anyone else in the corridors or on the stairs. Were
they as we were, trying to hide in plain sight miles from the Capital with its
commitments and connections?
Although it was
the off-season the first time for us, we didn’t dare to leave the room, afraid
of meeting a friend or colleague on a similar, illicit getaway. The next visit,
we dared to dine out on freshly-caught seafood and to stroll along the
seafront. Deception became easier and we began to behave recklessly; dining and
dancing in the most prestigious hotel on the seafront; the most likely place to
bump into someone that one of us knew. A year or so into the affair, the
excitement started to pale. We bickered about small things, whether the windows
should be opened or closed at night; whose turn it was to drive down and who should
catch the train. I wanted us to continue to travel separately but it no longer
suited her. I enjoyed the solitary drive or the gentle swaying of the train.
It was becoming
clear that the fun was over; it was getting seriously complicated and I just
didn’t want my everyday life to change. I didn’t need Noel Coward to see it for
what it was, a fling, no more no less. We never declared our love, or did we? I
can’t recall. I had to find a way extricate myself somehow from the web of lies
that I had told; make a clean breast of it to my wife and move on. She’d be
furious of course but she always took me back. I was a very good provider and I
never asked how she spent her allowance or what she did when I was away on business.
Suited us both.
cheers until next time
Gen
Besides, the new
secretary in the office caught my eye and I want to get to know her better.
Maybe lunch one day next week?
Hi Gen, interesting little story here. I detect shades of Atwood or a rosalind Pilcher in this one. Keep writing xx
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Interesting! I'm intrigued. You create a good sense of the place and reveal the narrator's character well.
ReplyDeleteI love how you show us his irritation growing with his lover's increaing expectations of him through his wanting to travel alone.
So much scope Genevieve. I'd love you to flesh it out more! Well done.
Thanks for taking time to read and comment, much appreciated
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